It took three days, once I had the outline for what to put where, but my first pass on my revised, post-Arctic trip is now in Final Draft and currently being edited. All this football this weekend is coming in very handy.
Lots of new insight into the Inuit culture; much more dramatic tension between Chance and Krueger. I was hoping to make a ship in the middle of the Arctic Ocean at the dawn of collapsing global ecosystem one of the most claustrophobic places imaginable.
We'll see how it goes. But the page number increased from 42 to 57 pages. A very healthy size for a second act. Let's just hope I can get it read like a stand alone segment - the meat in the middle of the sandwich.